3/23/2013

Irregularlies #221


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Critiques on the dialoue are welcome!

27 comments:

  1. Nice dialogue, but.. maybe replace the "STOP!" into "Wait" or "wait darling"...? i dunno. :)

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  2. Looking good man, the tones/shading turned out great and the dialogue is pretty solid also. Only minor thing that threw me for a loop was Sam's head turn, the glare left by his eyes is supposed to convey motion but I haven't seen that in a while so I was kind of caught off guard, good none-the-less.

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  3. just gonna say i really like the 'poised to penetrate but not yet in' panel - something to be said for foreplay and anticipation before the pounding starts. think that's why i liked page 3 of booth girl so much

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  4. Only complaint is the bottom left panel's anatomy... his width is a bit alien there.

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  5. Haha, the dialogue is perfect! xD

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  6. "Sit... I'm not done grading you yet."

    But I still like yours!

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  7. what can i say? great!

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  8. eww 30 Rock... Why would anyone want to watch that horrible show?

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  9. I have a trouble with the "i m go watch 30rock" panel :

    I really don't want to know that this story happen in the real life , beside 30rock on TV is also a time notion that i don't want to know either,more of that i don't want to think about 30rock show when I watch this comix (even if this show is very fun)

    i also think about all the people who doesn't know the show (it's very irritating when you can't understand a situation)

    for all those reasons i really think that you should replace this sentence with more generalist : "what i'm going to do now ?" or "what's on the TV ?" or something like that .

    sfme .

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    1. I think you might be putting too much intellectual thought into your porn.

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    2. Waaay to much thinking there bud. I'm pretty sure a lot of people are thinking more about Ellie's big tool than what 30 rock is.

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    3. I had a similar thought.

      I also don't think it's right that people here are trying to minimize this train of thought. I, for one, don't just mindlessly look at things, no matter what it is; if it's not stimulating in some way, it's not exciting. Not all of InCase's fans are mindless porn zombies. "AMG, MOAR COCK..."

      With porn becoming more and more mainstream as the years go by, it's not surprising to find people putting more and more thought into what goes into it. I don't think it's right to limit yourself or others no matter the subject. If the mention of a specific television show in a pornographic comic makes someone uncomfortable, perhaps the creator of such work should take this into account and listen to why it did that. For all the artist knows, it could save his ass in the future. Who knows?

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    4. But it's not a big deal when one or two guys don't like it. I mean, I don't even watch 30 Rock, I'd have liked it better if he said Ima go watch Dragon Ball Z, because I'm certain ALL of us know what DBZ is. I wouldn't call myself a "porn zombie" because I do take the time to READ the actual comics, I'm just not the type to care about something like that. As long as what I'm reading makes sense (grammar, spelling, etc), then I'm good.

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    5. i'm totally agree that I, sometimes, think too much ^^

      but also (maybe because of my bad english notions) there s a little missunderstoud here.


      30rock is not the specific target and what I said can be applied to all shows.

      what is interresting is why Sam tell that (if fact why mr.incase tell that ^^)
      there is 2 point of view :
      it' s just to say something about that he think that the game is over and he stop thinking about Ellie for now.
      in that case there is no need to specify a show which is in one way or another excluding.

      or

      it's for saying that the author is a real fan of 30rock and he want that the readers know about that fun show

      in that case it' could be interessting to say " i think 30rock is on" then "this show is so hylarious" for exemple

      sfme.

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  10. You could have Sam say "Imma go watch Seinfeld", but that would be a bit too meta...

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    1. That might be just meta enough huehuehuehue...

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  11. Oh I can't wait for the next page <3 <3

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  12. 30Rock? Seinfeld? Shows I really don't care for, and it seems a bunch of the other guys and gals here don't either. Isn't there something we all like?

    Game of Thrones anyone?

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  13. InCaseArt ! Could you please tell me what's your stuff for drawing ? I mean, the name of your tablet (to draw all of your drawings), 'cause I'd like to buy one. :3
    Thank you !

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  14. Just tell me, at some point, we get to see her amazing tits?

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  15. I LOVE his li'l pout. XD

    -Vishis

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  16. I liked the dialogue. It sounds realistic enough and adds a bit more to the characters. (Besides what does it matter which show the guy likes to watch? Or do you only like characters that share your every taste?)

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