That woman in the wall is such a nice, charming lady.
If you're having problems with dialog, you could just get a writer for the purpose of writing dialog. I'm sure there are people who'd be happy to do that kind of work.
Nah, I prefer doing it all myself. My problems are mostly related to english being my second language, and general lack of experience writing. I should eventually get better and more confident if I keep at it.
Your English is very good, better than some native speakers, and that Batman comic you did way back when is still one of my favorite things you've done.
Yea I don't see a problem with your dialogue at all, the story was great. Nothing seemed forced or cheesy.
Dat lip bite! I like where this is going.
yes ! the return of the bite ^^
DON'T MAKE ME GET OUT OF THIS WALL