-The trap should be the one biting his lips.-While the futa should have her tongue out/be grinning.-His shorts looks like they're in an uncomfortable position. they should be lowered or switched out with something more stretchy, like sweat-pants or some kind of underwear(briefs/panties)-I feel like her left arm is positioned wrong, as if she's supporting her body-weight on something; maybe put her hand a few inches below his left nipple, gripping his chest.-May I also suggest putting a sink behind the futas ass, a sandwich-maker/inside grill, in silver(Maybe somthing like this: http://reviews.cookware-online.co.uk/product-reviews/Appliances/Electric-Woks-Frying-Pans/Electric-Woks-Frying-Pans/Tefal/p/GC601028-Tefal-XL-Comfort-Grill.html ), and a microwaveoven to the left, closest to the wall.¤I do realize you won't be able to see much of these appliances, but that only makes them easier to draw, right?¤-The apron might look better if it's drawn wider?-Shirt-arms pulled up to the elbows?-Make her skirt a tiny bit longer and remove the stockings? (Women with a higher social-rank usually wears longer dresses/skirts without the stockings; don't they? While the ladies with bad skin and low self-esteem(or hookers) usually wear stockings?:[ I just noticed that you were dissatisfied with only their expressions; and here I wrote this über-long post thinking you couldn't pin-point what you didn't like about it... I should really read more accurately in the future; unless you do like some feedback? ]
That was an unexpectedly long post. lol.
InCase this is good, body position need a bit of revising on the trap. At, mostly on the ass region. drop the least visual ass cheek.
Noo, I like that asscheek; it gives depth to the image.
If it helps, I preferred the more hungry lust the bossfutalady had on her face in the sketch, and their dishevelled hair in the sketch was also nice since it gave the impression that they had been going at it for longer. Otherwise, this is a great improvement: hot idea and awesomely drawn.
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The dickgirl looks better WITHOUT the GLASSES..Please take under consideration Thank You
She is supposed have that business-look.
Personally I love the expressions, I suppose one thing to ask yourself is; what don't you like about them? They seem pretty accurate for the kind of situation, I love dem lip bites, but maybe an "Ooooh!" expression would be more to your liking in making it more better? Though you could do something bizarre and out of the ordinary too. In the long run they'll probably look better to you as you continue to progress through this piece.