Mmm, a nice cummy kiss.
You've got something pretty good going as far as story. You said she dropped her messenger bag earlier (To explain why you didn't draw it). Well, if you draw it on the floor at the end of the comic and show the Wall woman noticing it,you can play it out that the Futa has to come back for it (When she notices she lost it). And then a sequel is in order.
If you look at the bottom right of the roughs for the 7'th page you will notice the bag laying there, after the dickgirl have left. I am way ahead of you ;)
Oh ho ho, you sneaky guy. Though if you didn't do the messenger bag mishap on purpose, then it may have been a subconscious part of your brain say "Let's keep this going!". *takes a page from Bob Ross* There are no mistakes, just happy accidents...leading to an awesome sequel with Freckles and Blondie, booyah!On a side note, I think that Freckles and Blondie should be their official names.
In seeing the dialog I realized she was going to "snowball" her, then I saw the sketch for the next one and realized that no one would believe that I saw it "cumming". Oh well. But I do like that idea for a sequel with the messenger bag. The freckled futa is really cute, wanna see more of that one.
Wholeheartedly agree. I think she might be my favorite IC character so far :)
All your work is excellent but I think your comic pages are best. Your grey-scale shading is really impressive and your paneling is also excellent. Keep at it!
Can't wait to see page 7!Really like your work!
I have been enjoying your art work and found I had to comment. Only I can not stop long enough to do so. Just keep going from page to page hoping that there is another and then another page to view.Thanks for posting the rough-drafts; I have a lot to learn.