Oh gob yes, ultra sexy. So, how will it end though? Is freckles going to have money to pay blondie? Is the first time free? Of course I want to see this done first.
Great news! page 7 too! woohoo! hope we get to see even more pages in the future :)i think you have found your true calling bro! making great comics! :D
it might be better to take one more page between page 5 and 6, but its ok.
Now let's talk about this page 6:
first: Wow!
second: what a great idea to break the rectangular panels, and then make some overfilling part outside the frame (pleease dont use the panel regular black line on those parts ,it would ruin the effect), it adds a lot of dynamism in a comix which lacked a bit of that.
third: already flaccid in the panel just after the explosion? but why not , it's ok too.
fourth: maybe she may lose her hood in panel 2, so we can clearly see the hair in panel 4, very very hot this panel 4 by the way.
fifth: you MUST find an end as original as your first page this is an obligation! and it will become a fat ass comix!
thanks for sharing so mutch steps of the creation process and let us discuss and comment all that !
Bwah. I was hoping they'd fuck.
ReplyDeletewhoa, the view in the 3panel is so hot!
ReplyDeleteOh gob yes, ultra sexy. So, how will it end though? Is freckles going to have money to pay blondie? Is the first time free? Of course I want to see this done first.
ReplyDeleteA seventh page as well? You're the best! ^_^
ReplyDeleteWow, that bottom-left panel is SO hot.
ReplyDeleteGreat news! page 7 too! woohoo! hope we get to see even more pages in the future :)i think you have found your true calling bro! making great comics! :D
ReplyDeleteSeven pages of awesome.
ReplyDeletei love these wip pics. have you thought about making a how-it-is-made video again?
ReplyDeleteonly a word awesome
ReplyDeletewhat is the name of the futa girl and the other ? you should give her a name and you should do a second part of this because is awesome
Love your experimentation with the panels. Looks like it will be great!
ReplyDeleteI'm goign to go ahead and masturbate to this picture. I want you to know that there are people who masturbate to your art.
ReplyDeletehehe , hard to close this story in 6page ^^
ReplyDeleteit might be better to take one more page between page 5 and 6, but its ok.
Now let's talk about this page 6:
first: Wow!
second: what a great idea to break the rectangular panels, and then make some overfilling part outside the frame (pleease dont use the panel regular black line on those parts ,it would ruin the effect), it adds a lot of dynamism in a comix which lacked a bit of that.
third: already flaccid in the panel just after the explosion? but why not , it's ok too.
fourth: maybe she may lose her hood in panel 2, so we can clearly see the hair in panel 4, very very hot this panel 4 by the way.
fifth: you MUST find an end as original as your first page this is an obligation! and it will become a fat ass comix!
thanks for sharing so mutch steps of the creation process and let us discuss and comment all that !
Good luck !
Unf that asshole
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