Almost done! I'll finish the shading on the last panel and add the dialogue next time
I also did some more work on heads yesterday. I tried figuring out how to draw open mouths better.
I think I can draw a pretty bitching lips etc. but I have trouble placing them correctly on the face. I'll have to figure out how to do that.
Dude, don't you have a mirror? If you're worried about lip placement just look at your own face. Even if you have to take photos of your own expressions. An artists exposure to subject material is based upon the people they see everyday, and most of all themselves because you are the person you see the most everyday. You don't have to draw your self just look at the placement of your own features. Facially there are subtle differences between a man and a woman, but not so much that you can't use your own face as a reference.
ReplyDeleteThat aside the page is looking good. However you could have cut the second panels width by a 1/3, because even though you and I know know what's going on, you have to consider new readers might find that panel a bit confusing. Even if you made the image slightly smaller so people can get a good idea of the action. The placement of the hand, the odd cerated shape in the back of the womans head. That's just an opinion.
Other than it looks fantastic, so keep up the good work, dude. Looking forward to seeing more of it.
Yes, excitement...I can't wait to have a chance to color your comic, I think I'll probably turn into a Photoshop zombie until it's finished.
ReplyDeleteThis is why I love you. You're a fantastic artist, and always improving, but are never settled. Consistently wanting to get better...much love for that.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I think you draw a bitchin' EVERYTHING!!!! HAHA :3
Holy fuck u outdid urself on this one i love it u dont know how talented u are my freind
ReplyDeleteHi colleagues, pleaѕant aгtіclе and pleasant arguments commentеd at thіs рlaсе, I аm really
ReplyDeleteenjoying by thesе.
Feel free to vіsit mу weblog: energy healer
My page: spa treatments