This page feels a lot easier to draw than the previous ones. Did I get better at drawing comics, or did I finally stop caring?
I probably should start thinking about the dialogue right now... And how to make the next page the last one without making the ending too abrupt and weird. Eh.
I think you should have the futa shove her all the way down again and cum in her throat. Then have the girl puke up some cum and then they discuss payment. Just my two cents. Really love this comic.
ReplyDeleteHumm... That's not exactly what I had in mind, but your post gave me an idea for the ending. Thanks ;)
DeleteI wish you'd keep going with these to girls. I'd love a full comic, story and all. Your art style is really something. :)
ReplyDeletePersonally, I think the girl in the wall should tell the futa that she can come back any time.
ReplyDeleteJust my two cents? If you want to make for a fast ending, that doesn't seem too abrupt? The girl in the wall is already grabbing the futa's ass, right? You could have her slip a finger in the futa's back door. That sends a lot of guys over the edge pretty quick, might do the same for the futa? Just a thought :)
ReplyDeleteI support this idea. *fingers crossed for it happening*
Deleteshe can tell her : "luke , i' am your futa ..."
ReplyDelete... okay i leave.
i'm sorry but , you have changed your shadow between page 123 and 45, right ?
ReplyDeleteit s not a judgment but just my feeling .
i think the changes in page 4-5 are not good.
the shadow just give a blur effect on the draw without strengthening the line or making it more readable.
okay maybe the bulge pant page2 and the hood need a little shadow effect but page 4 there is too mutch.
as my grand mother say , too mutch gradiant kill the gradiant. (ok, maybe it's not exactly what she said...)
second thing, when i m looking page1 i see a very pulpy lips girl and page after page she's loosing that thickness . it s just a detail but...
hoping this comment help you a little (perhaps just by making you laugh at how much I'm wrong ^^)
good luck anyway and i waiting impatiently for the conclusion .