I love the second panel, but I'm not so certain about the third. I think you should zoom in a little, enough so you only see the top of wall-girl's head. Same pose and everything.
Very Nice! But it's a bit disorienting - in the last panel of page two the customer is on the right, and here the point of view is switched, and she's on the left. Or maybe it's normal for comics, and it just caught my eye...
i'm sorry but i'm disoriented too , i dont understand what the girl who prepare herself to suck a snail has to do with all the work ... and why is she the only panel in color ....
Really lovin' how this is coming along. As another said, I know you've been pretty down about how it's going, and I can understand that since building a comic is probably pretty frustrating. I don't think I could do it myself.
But I still think the result is pretty incredible so far. :) I look forward to checking my news feed every day just to see the progress, let me put it that way.
I think 6-7 pages totall. I want to finish this one as fast as I logically can so I can start on the next one with less restricting scenario, properly designed characters and actuall scipt.
Just read the other 3 pages and... daaaaaamn.
ReplyDeleteI know you've expressed doubts with this, but it's coming out really nice IMO. I'd actually love to see a straight-up sex scene with these two :3
I love the second panel, but I'm not so certain about the third. I think you should zoom in a little, enough so you only see the top of wall-girl's head. Same pose and everything.
ReplyDeleteNah, the hooded girl is gonna be saying something and I think I want her to be seen in at least one panel per page.
DeleteVery Nice! But it's a bit disorienting - in the last panel of page two the customer is on the right, and here the point of view is switched, and she's on the left. Or maybe it's normal for comics, and it just caught my eye...
ReplyDeletei'm sorry but i'm disoriented too , i dont understand what the girl who prepare herself to suck a snail has to do with all the work ... and why is she the only panel in color ....
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ReplyDeleteReally lovin' how this is coming along. As another said, I know you've been pretty down about how it's going, and I can understand that since building a comic is probably pretty frustrating. I don't think I could do it myself.
ReplyDeleteBut I still think the result is pretty incredible so far. :) I look forward to checking my news feed every day just to see the progress, let me put it that way.
Oh gob yes! How many pages is this going to be about? This would be a comic I'd pay to have a copy of.
ReplyDeleteI think 6-7 pages totall. I want to finish this one as fast as I logically can so I can start on the next one with less restricting scenario, properly designed characters and actuall scipt.
DeleteYou'll be doing ponies after this comic, right?
ReplyDeletewhen you finish that comic you have to do more comic futanari of the futa girl
ReplyDeleteyou are amazing