Same for me ^^ good job .... but If I can afford a small intervention, isn't the layout a bit too heavy? with an action and then the face of the futa, then another action etc. ..
It's just an idea but would not it be better to put the small boxes with the futa's face on top, and merge them into only four boxes? perhaps with a gradient effect at the neck or shoulders birth, to signify the different point of view.
This could give a more dynamic reading (with only 4 actions the faces would reflect the exact timing of the action and that resolve an eventually background problem ^^)
Or perhaps simply not using rectangular boxes (but what form to use , i dont know)
She looks the same to me. =)
ReplyDeleteSame for me ^^ good job .... but
DeleteIf I can afford a small intervention, isn't the layout a bit too heavy? with an action and then the face of the futa, then another action etc. ..
It's just an idea but would not it be better to put the small boxes with the futa's face on top, and merge them into only four boxes?
perhaps with a gradient effect at the neck or shoulders birth, to signify the different point of view.
This could give a more dynamic reading (with only 4 actions the faces would reflect the exact timing of the action and that resolve an eventually background problem ^^)
Or perhaps simply not using rectangular boxes (but what form to use , i dont know)
Or I nitpick and the cutting is fine as it is.
sfme
You draw the best faces, love 'em.
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