1/06/2013

Irregularlies #166

Even more inacurate environment studies!


Page #1 finished (unless I made some new spelling errors):


I tried to trim down the dialogue a bit, and make Sam less whiny. Also, yes I do love giving my characters non gender specific names.

I also did the first draft of the dialogue for the second page. 


It's also pretty wordy. But the next 4 pages will have considerably less talking and more action, so I think that's fine. Gotta establish them characters first.




9 comments:

  1. How did you learn all this?

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    1. The BD and the environment, I am an amateur artist and I even dream of drawing like you

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    2. Do studies every day untill you're good enough to do it from imagination.

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  2. Is it Elie or Ellie?

    The number of consonants in a word shouldn't be changed.

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  3. Also; page2;
    Wonderful* (Twice)

    Are you gon... should be changed to:
    Were you gon...

    Other than that; I can't see any direct grammatical errors :)

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  4. Please continue this story pleaseee ^^

    http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-_BdEk69k__0/T8TTSmh8IaI/AAAAAAAAAzM/c_uWVt_j2IM/s1600/29+copy.jpg

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    1. yeah i'm also a fan of this one ^^

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