Work on the comic is going slow. I decided to extend the blowjob scene to be two pages, instead of one. Which means that I have to script them from scratch.
Here's what I've got so far.
-Eliot is sucking dat dick
-Sam tries to push her down because he's horny
-She's like "Hell naw, you're not doing that"
-Instead she starts fingering his ass
I am pretty happy with how the 3rd page looks. I am a little bit worried that 80% of the page are just 3 shots of Eliot with a dick in her mouth. Kinda monotonous. I might try to squeeze in a reaction shot of Sam somewhere around the 2nd panel.
I like the content of the 4th page, but the panel composition is dull. I think that the top right part is too busy. I might do away with Sam's reactions, and do only one shot of Elies fingers getting in the butt.
I am open to critique on these.