I love the second one, the colors are amazing. Take care about the hand that holds the cock, i think the fingers are not around it correctly, they need to have more volume.
Now that you pointed it out, you're right. Her right thumb is in line with the cock, and the fingers caught between them completely vanish and have no volume. Looks like you ran out of room to draw the right hand fingertips. To fix it, either add flesh to the insides of her fingers and squeeze in the cock a lot harder (just like the balls), or move the thumb to the right (looking at the image) and paint in the fingertips/nails. Not sure how hard it is to do it at this point in the piece; I'm no artist.
Same anon - an easier fix would be to raise her thumb up an inch, so it appears to be resting on top of her index finger and not in front of it, then draw out he fingertips a little. Don't get me wrong, its still a great piece.
Yeah, I noticed that there's something wrong with that hand pretty early in the colouring process, but I kept putting the problem off, because I didn't want to deal with it ;). Fortunately since it's a painting, fixing stuff like that is pretty easy.
Thanks for your comments! They were really helpfull in figuring this one out :)
Same anon again (I need to make an account...) no problem. I'll only ever gripe about technical or logistical issues, never artistic idea or form. This is why I choose you to commission the 5-6 page sketch sequence in the near future; I fully trust your talent/skill and will never contest it.
I am reather excited for the new SW film. I know it won't be anything like the originals. Today's audiences want something else, and it will be made for them, not for SW fans. We will get a competent action movie, with good special effects that happens to be set in the Star Wars universe. And that's fine with me. Of course I'd like something as epic as the first trilogy, but after the awfull prequels I'll settle for 'just good'.
Plus, Disney did very well with Marvel Studios. IronMan, Capitan America, Thor, and finally Avengers were all pretty damn good. Not brilliant, but still very enjoyable. Disney knows what it's doing.
yeah i admit that i was a bit harsh , Nolan's batman and josh wehdon's avengers for exemple (the new tarantino : django unchained is a very good moment unlike the hobbit.)
for SW i hope for something as good as the animated serie The clone wars.
Don't forget he fact that it's J.J. Abrams directing it (Star Trek, Colverfield, etc.) That has to count for a lot, for me the new SW is a mixed thing, I'd really like it to be awesome with Abrams take on it...but then again I'm kind of expecting it to be rubbish...time will tell though.
If you ask me, the biggest winner in this will be Disney because if they fail then people will just say "WELL DUH!!" If they succeed then, well that is something else they succeed in. So I am thinking Disney is thinking of this as a win/win.
That twi'lek is quite gorgeous. Is she longing for someone, imagining what she would do with them if they were there with her? Perhaps she's watching others who are enjoying themselves, hoping, waiting, to be invited?
I love the way you draw fit dickgirls. They just looks so... Appetizing. Like they're ready to grab their partner, envelop them, and not let got for half a day. Then it's shower- and cuddle-time before sleep... And when they wake up, it's the same thing all over again.
I love the second one, the colors are amazing. Take care about the hand that holds the cock, i think the fingers are not around it correctly, they need to have more volume.
ReplyDeleteNow that you pointed it out, you're right. Her right thumb is in line with the cock, and the fingers caught between them completely vanish and have no volume. Looks like you ran out of room to draw the right hand fingertips. To fix it, either add flesh to the insides of her fingers and squeeze in the cock a lot harder (just like the balls), or move the thumb to the right (looking at the image) and paint in the fingertips/nails. Not sure how hard it is to do it at this point in the piece; I'm no artist.
DeleteSame anon - an easier fix would be to raise her thumb up an inch, so it appears to be resting on top of her index finger and not in front of it, then draw out he fingertips a little. Don't get me wrong, its still a great piece.
DeleteYeah, I noticed that there's something wrong with that hand pretty early in the colouring process, but I kept putting the problem off, because I didn't want to deal with it ;). Fortunately since it's a painting, fixing stuff like that is pretty easy.
DeleteThanks for your comments! They were really helpfull in figuring this one out :)
Same anon again (I need to make an account...) no problem. I'll only ever gripe about technical or logistical issues, never artistic idea or form. This is why I choose you to commission the 5-6 page sketch sequence in the near future; I fully trust your talent/skill and will never contest it.
DeleteInCase, considering the Twi'leks and stuff, are you excited for the new Star Wars?
ReplyDeletedo youb really think that actual hollwood studios can create something better than de originals back from the 80's.
DeleteLet s take a look:
cameron's first trilogy SW > second (pre)logy
scott's alien > scott's prometheus
tim burton's from 80s-90s even 2000 > actual tim burton's
and i'm not talking about all the bad remakes and franchises ruined by the new generation of realisators (ok just total recall remake for exemple)
hollywood studio's are now a shit factory .
I am reather excited for the new SW film. I know it won't be anything like the originals. Today's audiences want something else, and it will be made for them, not for SW fans. We will get a competent action movie, with good special effects that happens to be set in the Star Wars universe. And that's fine with me. Of course I'd like something as epic as the first trilogy, but after the awfull prequels I'll settle for 'just good'.
DeletePlus, Disney did very well with Marvel Studios. IronMan, Capitan America, Thor, and finally Avengers were all pretty damn good. Not brilliant, but still very enjoyable. Disney knows what it's doing.
yeah i admit that i was a bit harsh , Nolan's batman and josh wehdon's avengers for exemple (the new tarantino : django unchained is a very good moment unlike the hobbit.)
Deletefor SW i hope for something as good as the animated serie The clone wars.
but to be honest, I am very worried.
Don't forget he fact that it's J.J. Abrams directing it (Star Trek, Colverfield, etc.) That has to count for a lot, for me the new SW is a mixed thing, I'd really like it to be awesome with Abrams take on it...but then again I'm kind of expecting it to be rubbish...time will tell though.
DeleteIf you ask me, the biggest winner in this will be Disney because if they fail then people will just say "WELL DUH!!" If they succeed then, well that is something else they succeed in. So I am thinking Disney is thinking of this as a win/win.
DeleteThat twi'lek is quite gorgeous. Is she longing for someone, imagining what she would do with them if they were there with her? Perhaps she's watching others who are enjoying themselves, hoping, waiting, to be invited?
ReplyDeleteI love the way you draw fit dickgirls. They just looks so... Appetizing. Like they're ready to grab their partner, envelop them, and not let got for half a day. Then it's shower- and cuddle-time before sleep... And when they wake up, it's the same thing all over again.
Maybe I'm projecting. Just saying it'd be nice.
Yes, cant wait to see the finished product. :D
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