2/24/2013

Irregularlies #203

Shouldn't have done that weird perspective in panel 3. I screwed it up. Oh well...


3 comments:

  1. I think what's throwing you off is the position/angle of her face to her neck and shoulders. Pane 2 has her leaning forward (Eliot has some fine curves) and the angle in panel 3 makes it look like she's sitting between his legs. Maybe bring her neck and shoulders arther back and it fixes the perspective.

    Totally anticipating the next pages; Eliot's dong gets to come out and play!

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  2. Great! Now have her feed it back to him like at the end of the other comic.

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