2/25/2013

Irregularlies #204

Fixing your mistakes 101: crop the shit out of it. Third panel is still kinda fucked up, but I am not getting back and redoing it. 


Eliot is gonna get a pretty big panel on the next page, for her reveal. She can stand to have her butt cropped out of this one. 

All that's left to do is to revise the dialogue and make proper speech bubbles. 

5 comments:

  1. I read the first sentence as "Eliot is gonna get pretty big on the next page, for her reveal." I already pictured Eliot rising up and Sam staring at her strained and stretched-out tent in her jeans.

    Might want to throw in a gushing or swallowing sound effect on the third panel so it looks like she's not falling asleep with a cock in her mouth :D

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  2. Hang on, I'm confused. Is the top right or bottom left the third panel?

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  3. This is fantastically delicious, as always. I can't wait to see what comes next. ^_^ You never fail to disappoint.~

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